Вино вместо пива
Есть бутылка вина, а мне хочется пива,
Я один, я в квартире, я сижу на полу,
Стрелки старых часов слишком неторопливо
Завершают свой круг, приближаясь к утру…
Есть бутылка вина, но мне хочется пива,
Я читаю стихи бьющим в стены ветрам,
Представляя себя у края обрыва,
Завернувшись в халат я похож на вигвам,
Нехорошо пить пиво из бутылки на полу!
Неэстетично, да! Но дьявольски приятно!
И кто-то как обычно спросит: «Почему?»
Да просто хорошо! Ну что здесь непонятно?
Есть бутылка вина, только хочется пива,
И тебе позвонить , нету правильных слов,
Мне б бежать побыстрее, да видно кончились силы,
А вообще все отлично, и без лишних понтов…
Я голодный с утра, а есть коробка с печеньем…
Бегут нестройные мысли как мутный поток,
Всевозможных метафор, чьих то там изречений,
А вообще все отлично — все сделал как смог!
Нехорошо пить пиво из бутылки на полу,
Неэстетично, да! Но дьявольски приятно!
И кто-то как обычно спросит: «Почему?!»
Да просто хорошо! Ну что здесь непонятно?
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